Once I did write
Now I can’t find the time
The meter is a fight
And I can’t find the rhyme
I do write this blog
I find it quite fun
But if poetry you seek
Visit Hemingway’s Shotgun
See, it’s not that hard, Dave
You don’t have to pout
And now I must wave
Zel-kun is out
Julie Scott | 25-Mar-08 at 10:00 am | Permalink
Ok.. ok… it’s hard to fit it into a good poem then.
You still have way too many syllables in that line as compared to the rest of the poem. You also have too many syllables in line 3. You got it right on the last stanza, though.
And that wasn’t David, it was me.
I’ll stop bitching at you now.
Zel-kun | 25-Mar-08 at 10:16 am | Permalink
It was only a lark
A piece on the fly
No walk in the park
I’ll now go and cry
Julie Scott | 25-Mar-08 at 10:39 am | Permalink
Don’t cry dear Zel
T’was a good go
I gave it up
some time ago.
Zaida | 25-Mar-08 at 1:28 pm | Permalink
I miss your poetry…