Comments on: Poetry http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/ Occasionally Making Fun of Inane Spammers Fri, 29 Aug 2008 03:12:41 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: Zaida http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11356 Zaida Tue, 25 Mar 2008 19:28:49 +0000 http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11356 I miss your poetry... I miss your poetry…

]]> By: Julie Scott http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11355 Julie Scott Tue, 25 Mar 2008 16:39:20 +0000 http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11355 Don't cry dear Zel T'was a good go I gave it up some time ago. Don’t cry dear Zel
T’was a good go
I gave it up
some time ago.

]]> By: Zel-kun http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11354 Zel-kun Tue, 25 Mar 2008 16:16:23 +0000 http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11354 It was only a lark A piece on the fly No walk in the park I'll now go and cry It was only a lark
A piece on the fly
No walk in the park
I’ll now go and cry

]]> By: Julie Scott http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11353 Julie Scott Tue, 25 Mar 2008 16:00:05 +0000 http://www.zelkun.com/2008/03/25/poetry/#comment-11353 Ok.. ok... it's hard to fit it into a good poem then. ;) You still have way too many syllables in that line as compared to the rest of the poem. You also have too many syllables in line 3. You got it right on the last stanza, though. And that wasn't David, it was me. ;) I'll stop bitching at you now. Ok.. ok… it’s hard to fit it into a good poem then. ;)

You still have way too many syllables in that line as compared to the rest of the poem. You also have too many syllables in line 3. You got it right on the last stanza, though.

And that wasn’t David, it was me. ;)

I’ll stop bitching at you now.

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