For reasons unknown
I sent email in haiku
I found it funny
A challenge received
To do the same with my blog
I will not back down
To see example
From a crazy fiance
Please read following:
“I have a challenge
Just for you.To see how well
you can put to use
your skill in haiku.
you are to blog about haikus
these, our own, exchanged
And the whole post shall
indeed, be a big haiku
to amuse readers”
A challenge received
A challenge I defeated
Annihilation
Zel-kun is now out
I am finished writing now
Comment in haiku
Sabrejack | 19-Dec-07 at 3:44 pm | Permalink
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Zel-kun | 19-Dec-07 at 3:45 pm | Permalink
Just one dot too long
On all three lines of haiku
It’s five-seven-five
Zaida | 19-Dec-07 at 3:57 pm | Permalink
This was amusing
But we must stop this right now
it must annoy some
Zel-kun | 19-Dec-07 at 4:49 pm | Permalink
You are mistaken
There is no higher art form
Than that of haiku
Sabrejack | 19-Dec-07 at 8:38 pm | Permalink
How dare you assume error?
Maybe I did it on purpose.
Nah. I was just off one.
Zel-kun | 19-Dec-07 at 9:13 pm | Permalink
You drive me crazy
With your blatant disregard
Of the haiku scheme
Sabrejack | 20-Dec-07 at 1:59 pm | Permalink
True art breaks new ground.
Everything else is simply
imitation.
Zel-kun | 20-Dec-07 at 2:48 pm | Permalink
Thou art annoying
I will break your back over
My knee like so, ha!
Sabrejack | 20-Dec-07 at 4:46 pm | Permalink
I just write the lines
as they naturally occur.
Is that so wrong?
Julie Scott | 20-Dec-07 at 6:26 pm | Permalink
Please watch the spell check
The proofreader is on call
The word is “challenge”
Zel-kun | 20-Dec-07 at 6:44 pm | Permalink
I looked it over
I cannot find the misspell
Please check it again
David N. Scott | 22-Dec-07 at 2:16 am | Permalink
Haiku is so weird
Just based on syllable count
Not my fav’rite thing